6th Place in HATPC Comp #27 - Linear

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Boom. Up on creap55.

A little warning, every once in a while you'll get a random shockwave error, but it looks like it only ever happens on the first trap. if that does happen, just hit F5 to refresh the game.

And the beginning part should look familiar...

The second dynamite trap after Intertester's entry ended isn't cool Until that most is fine except for the Shockwave errors. But I suggest you nerf the trap I mentioned by a bit.

That one isn't too hard. You're very peculiar about traps.

"Nerfing" that won't do anything. It's the dynamite on the floorless section that's causing the shockwave error, which is also why it only happens there...

Oh wait. I just figured out what you meant by that. Cuz I just died the way you probably did.

And that's why I was thinking about naming this "LingeringDanger"...

Yeah, I wasn't speaking about nerfing the Shockwave error.

Thing is, you can work around it by making the dynamite go through the terrain over the arrows instead of going at the floorless area, and thereby removing all chances of a Shockwave.

Okay, I beat it. Fairly nice, but you get some points deducted based on the Shockwave errors and the ugly looks of the cave, and also that it ended a bit too fast, but overall I like this one.

Aww man... I got to the ladder section, and then died.

nerfing the dynamite trap? It's not really hard. If you want to avoid that arrow, all you have to do is hover into the secret area, and you're able to take a breather and prepare for the slightly cooler trap ahead...

Anyways, now that shockwave error should be gone...

I've already supposedly fixed that shockwave error, and I've just updated the template. Does it have a better look to it now?

Yeah, everything except for the exact center and the border to the top-right corner looks quite smooth.

Then perhaps you should update your rating to fit the current condition of the cave

Oh, and I've just redid a little more of the template. The boulders looks smoother, and the center should too.

Now that I see this cave, it's rather funny that Teo basicly made a wt of the bottom area.

Can I make a wt?

Well, you've already got the bottom part down.

I suppose you can, but try to have music this time. That was the big negative of your walkthrough to "TheMaze", that and the fact that the cave itself was nothing...

Can I??

Sure.

You shouldn't speak about how the lack of music is a negative point seering as you don't include music in any WT you make yourself...

I know. Which is exactly why I try to avoid making my own walkthroughs..

And you still haven't edited your rate, even though I took away some of the things listed under your "points off for" section...

I just beat it. by editing the code and making checkpoints for myself.

pretty good cave. there were lots of great traps in this cave but some of them just weren't cool. It wasn't until after I got out of intertester's area that I started enjoying the cave, to tell you the truth

This doesn't seem too big. I'll try it sometime.

Points taken off because of the ripoff.

WHAT? Quirvy made LD I, he made LD II, and you call this a ripoff? O_o

Also, Intertester isn't a user, it's an account for accel to use when testing stuff. Quirvy made a cave, hijacked Intertester and uploaded it on his account.

Now, go change your rating or I do it for you.

Although it's wrong to restrict your opinion, in cases where you rate a serious cave that low, with that type of a reason, that rating doesn't stand. You can re-rate it, but if you want to get a rating through, it has to be reasonable.

You're reason for you're 1/10 rate is very poorly explained. What rip off? This cave is fully original.

Until you can expand on that, you really can't rate this cave that low.

It's good, I honestly just don't like the Intertester area, though.

Pretty Groovy!

  lol I just noticed that now.

yeah quirvy lots of people don't seem to be liking intertester's area.

Well, that'll happen when you use an entire cave as a fifth of one.