If it's rubbish, don't upload it. Oh yeah, from what I've played, it's good, but it is very ugly.

In fact, do put your bad levels on here, that way we can tell you on what to improve. (hasn't played the level)

Yes, don't hesitate to upload all of your levels. You're good at making these already. Back when i first started with HatPC, another game, i wasn't very good, now after some helpful criticism, I have improved in making! Another example is Sup_mus, he has improved very much. Don't be discouraged by negative comments!

From what I see of this level, it is very good. Like I said in your first one, this was not too hard which made it quite enjoyable. To improve, try reading Imtimi's SMF guide! www.interguild.org/blogs/?id=5435 It has helped me, too, with how to place scenery and monsters.

I don't mean to say this is bad, the idea is good, it is just that the land tiles don't look like flying carpets, they do kinda make the level look ugly. One good thing you can do is but brown blocks under the land tiles to make it look better, like in some of my levels.

http://interguild.org/levels/index.php?id=3095
http://interguild.org/levels/index.php?id=3287

Keep making the levels, you're off to a great start! You could be a great SMF player and level maker one day.

Thanks

Soccerboy, going back to you talking about getting better by the level and all, that didn't suite me very well. I've made tons of caves, and there were more than half of them getting crap ratings, like 6/10 and under. It depends on the person whether you get better or not at level making.

I played this level, it's pretty cool. There's something that I didn't like, though, but I can't seem to figure out what it was. What Soccerboy said, you're getting better at creating levels than previously. Keep it up

I enjoyed this hugely; but more work on the scenery.