"Try against the current," Hannah said. She eagerly dived under and swam for the current. She realized that it was a tunnel with no air pockets, so Hannah surfaced and took in a large, deep breath. Then she swam into the tunnel, dashing and pushing against the strong current. When she was halfway, Hannah began losing her breath. Hannah dashed and pushed and kicked, but as she advanced forward, her breath became smaller and smaller. As Hannah reached the end, she lost her breath. She tried to hold on, hold on...her chest was bursting and in pain. Hannah saw light, and dashed for it. She took a deep breath of the lovely, sweet air. Then Hannah saw a cave nearby. She looked underwater, there was no other way. So Hannah climbed up and ran for the cave entrance.

But as Hannah was almost outside, she saw a glint out of the corner of her eye.  She kept running, as she turned her head to look.
"The gem!" she exclaimed out loud.
But just at that moment, she tripped and fell into a deep pit of water.  With no way out and a lot of spikes, Hannah carefully looked for a way out.  The, purely by accident, she found a secret area.She cheered and started running down the pathway.

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"Try against the current," Hannah said. She eagerly dived under and swam for the current. She realized that it was a tunnel with no air pockets, so Hannah surfaced and took in a large, deep breath. Then she swam into the tunnel, dashing and pushing against the strong current. When she was halfway, Hannah began losing her breath. Hannah dashed and pushed and kicked, but as she advanced forward, her breath became smaller and smaller. As Hannah reached the end, she lost her breath. She tried to hold on, hold on...her chest was bursting and in pain. Hannah saw light, and dashed for it. She took a deep breath of the lovely, sweet air. Then Hannah saw a cave nearby. She looked underwater, there was no other way. So Hannah climbed up and ran for the cave entrance.
But as Hannah was almost outside, she saw a glint out of the corner of her eye.  She kept running, as she turned her head to look.
"The gem!" she exclaimed out loud.
But just at that moment, she tripped and fell into a deep pit of water.  With no way out and a lot of spikes, Hannah carefully looked for a way out.  The, purely by accident, she found a secret area.She cheered and started running down the pathway. Just then, she saw green slime everywhere. She realized she wasn't in a cave. She was in a giant monster's stomach!

Then she realized that she'd forgotten to take her hallucinatory medication. She popped the pills out of her pocket and tossed a couple down her throat. The green grooze went away and she was back in a cave! Hurray!

She crawled through the secret area, struggling for several seconds to jump into a tunnel a tile higher than the one she was in, before finally she found the exit and poked her head out. However, she found that she was staring at something truly horrifying!

Oh my god! It was Haily!

It was horrifying but cool! she was looking at one of her biggest fans!

"Try against the current," Hannah said. She eagerly dived under and swam for the current. She realized that it was a tunnel with no air pockets, so Hannah surfaced and took in a large, deep breath. Then she swam into the tunnel, dashing and pushing against the strong current. When she was halfway, Hannah began losing her breath. Hannah dashed and pushed and kicked, but as she advanced forward, her breath became smaller and smaller. As Hannah reached the end, she lost her breath. She tried to hold on, hold on...her chest was bursting and in pain. Hannah saw light, and dashed for it. She took a deep breath of the lovely, sweet air. Then Hannah saw a cave nearby. She looked underwater, there was no other way. So Hannah climbed up and ran for the cave entrance.
But as Hannah was almost outside, she saw a glint out of the corner of her eye.  She kept running, as she turned her head to look.
"The gem!" she exclaimed out loud.
But just at that moment, she tripped and fell into a deep pit of water.  With no way out and a lot of spikes, Hannah carefully looked for a way out.  The, purely by accident, she found a secret area.She cheered and started running down the pathway. Just then, she saw green slime everywhere. She realized she wasn't in a cave. She was in a giant monster's stomach!
Then she realized that she'd forgotten to take her hallucinatory medication. She popped the pills out of her pocket and tossed a couple down her throat. The green grooze went away and she was back in a cave! Hurray!

She crawled through the secret area, struggling for several seconds to jump into a tunnel a tile higher than the one she was in, before finally she found the exit and poked her head out. However, she found that she was staring at something truly horrifying! Oh my god! It was Haily! It was horrifying but cool! she was looking at one of her biggest fans! She screamed. Then she laughed. Then she...

...cried out. Darkness surrounded her. Hannah felt sick. She felt like a invisible force was squeezing her... squishing her... beating her to a pulp. Hannah screamed out. The force squashed her and squeezed her, and it squeezed her stomach so tight she coughed and spluttered and choked. Then, Hannah fainted. Then, she woke up in a small cavern. A beautiful gem lay there. "The gem!" cried Hannah. She reached for the gem. Then, as she touched it, rocks blocked the cave entrance. "Oh no! I'm trapped!" cried Hannah. Then Hannah was sucked into the gem, and pain streaked though her body. "Yowch! Gah...oh! Waaaaaah!" Hannah crashed...

...and she fell into a tunnel though a cave though a portal. BANG! CRASH! Hannah reverted to her hucat self. Then, Hannah fainted again. She woke up at the summit of Starsky Palace. A huge rock was implanted into a stone tile on the floor. Then the rock cracked, and a eye come into view on the rock. Hannah then suddenly - without thinking - hugged the rock, then put it back on the tile. The rock cracked open like a coconut. Then, a hucat appeared on the stone tile, enveloped in light. The rock pieces faded away, then the light faded. There, on the stone tile, was a Jirachi - known as the hucat how grants wishes. Jirachi looked up, and giggled a little. "Tee-hee! I'm Jirachi! I let your wishes come true! Make a wish, don't worry!" Hannah thought of a wish. Then...

... she realized that she needed more hallucinatory medication! She reached into her pocket, tossed some more pills into her mouth, and then heaved a sigh of relief as she found herself back in the cave, staring at Haily. She made a note to ask the pharmacist for an increased dosage.

"Haily," she said after a moment. "It's quite annoying when an automatic space is added when clicking on the Quote or Smilie buttons. You should fix this." Haily shook his head, smacked Hannah across the face, and snatched one of her treasures. Hannah stumbled back, rubbing her cheek, and looked up to see Haily pattering away into the distance.

The sound of the door sliding closed could be heard in the distance. Hannah scowled. She knew she had to get the treasure back from Haily, but the gem very near. She pondered whether to get the gem before going after Haily, or to abandon the gem altogether.

"I must get the gem! That is my goal," said Hannah. She ran into a chamber just right of her. Hannah ran and ran. Then she got tired, but she ran and ran. The tunnel seemed to go on forever. Hannah's legs were strained, swollen and in pain from all the running. Then she came to a huge chamber. The gem stood by. Hannah lurched for it. CRASH! She fell into a pit, on top of Haily. A sword stood nearby. Hannah took the sword and stabbed Haily in the heart and chopped his head off. Hannah reclaimed her treasure and found Haily's grappling hook. Hannah used it to climb up from the pit. Then Hannah came to the top and claimed the gem. "Yes!" she cried. Then a Jirachi appeared and sprinkled stardust on her, and Hannah was teleported to the entrance of the cave. But suddenly, out of nowhere, a Skitty came and pounced on her, knocking Hannah to the ground. Then the Skitty mewled and licked her face. Hannah pushed the Skitty away, then it disintergrated. Then another Jirachi appeared, and sprinkled stardust on the gem and Hannah's treasure. Then it disappeared. The gem grew into a large, beautiful ruby crystal and the treasure to small sparkling emeralds and sapphires. Then Hannah went home.
THE END.

New story:

Once there was a evil Skitty who's evil dream was to catch a Jirachi and use it's power to rule the entire world. Now a Skitty is very powerful but a Jirachi is ten times more powerful. The Skitty was called Primo and Primo knew that there is only one Jirachi in the world. This Jirachi was contained in a comet that crashed into the summit of Starsky Palace every 10,000 years and only stayed for fourteen days before going back into the comet. Primo headed for the Starsky Palace. After travesing all 50 floors (oh my gosh!) Primo came to the summit. He waited. Then, suddenly,

... Hannah realized that she needed more hallucinatory medication! She reached into her pocket, whipped out the container, and tossed a couple more pills into her mouth. She threw another in there for good measure.

Slowly, she faded back into the cave, standing in the middle between the gem and Haily. Hannah gave a sorrowful look at the gem, said, "I'm sorry, but I don't have time to get you... I need to be home in time for House," and bolted after Haily, jumping over stalactites, ducking through secret areas, and stepping over cheatable traps. Eventually, Haily was in sight, and Hannah was closing in.

"Not this time, Hannah," Haily said, stopping and turning around. Laughing maniacally, Haily twirled his mustache and took flight in an escape pod, soaring up and away to the upper levels of the cave. Hannah sighed and looked around for a way to follow Haily.

"Need some help, Hannah?" a voice said from behind. Hannah spun around and saw...

...a Jirachi! At least it was. Hannah said, "I wish Haily died right at this moment!" "if it is that you want, it is that which you will get!" said Jirachi, then called a star. The star twirled around Jirachi. Then nothing happened. "Step aside," said Jirachi. Hannah moved aside. "Mmm...Mmm..." said Jirachi. Then it fell to the floor. Then, the curve on it's body opened, and a eye came into view. "Waaaaaaah!" cried Jirachi. It's scream was deafening. Then the ceilings of the cave disappeared. Then, the third eye released a beam at Haily. Then there was a explosion and Haily fell dead to the floor. Then Jirachi's third eye closed, then it disappeared.

Fortunately, Hannah had a spare bottle of hallucinatory medication on her, and so she popped another three pills. Her vision focused back to normal, and she could make out that the person in front of her was none other than Dando!

"Any more attempts to derail the thread with Catplanet spam will result in a suspension," Dando said, before sprouting angel wings and promptly flying away. Hannah took note of this, and then set her sights on the shrinking silhouette of Haily and his escape pod. Hannah glanced to the side and saw Teo sitting in a small metal plane. "Wy wchodzicie!" he said. Hannah grinned, hopped into the plane, and they took off after Haily. A daring chase sequence was about to take place!

For a second Hannah was wondering how the hell a plane fitted inside the cave and how on Earth there was enough room for a chase sequence.
But Hannah had no time to ponder such questions, as Haily has just grabbed a Double Missile upgrade!

But suddenly, Hannah realized she'd taken three pills instead of two! The overdose meant EXPLOSION! Hannah then suddenly felt sick. Teo landed the plane on a rock island were Haily was running into a cave. Hannah went out, and the plane flew away. Then Hannah checked her hallucinatory medicine. It was empty! Then Dando flew above and dropped a extra bottle on Hannah. It donged her on the head. Then a Pawkeet covered in Neopimples (caused by touching a TNT staff member) flew for the bottle thinking it contained Anti-Neopimples. Hannah found a sword and stabbed the Pawkeet in the foot. The Pawkeet crashed into the sea. Hannah chased Haily, along the way popping the hallucinatory medicine in her pocket. Then Hannah caught up to Haily and stabbed him with the sword, and claimed her treasure. Then a Red Pawkeet appeared. Hannah took four pills of the hallucinatory medicine, then exploded. Hannah was then on the ground, dizzy, and black all over. Hannah shook off the blackness. "I feel Skitty...I mean dizzy," Hannah giggled at her mistake. Then Hannah looked at the label of her medicine:

ANTI-HALLUCATION MEDICINE
2 PILLS EVERY TIME YOU THINK YOU ARE HAVING A HALLUCATION
BEWARE: OVERDOSE WITH 3, 4 OR MORE PILLS TWICE AND YOU WILL EXPLODE.
BEWARE: OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE THROWING UP, CONTINOUS DIZZINESS, AND CRYING WHEN NOT FEELING SAD.
BEWARE: OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE SEIZURES.
BEWARE: A QUADRUPLE OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE NEVERENDING HALLUCATIONS THAT CANNOT BE CURED AND MISTAKING PEOPLE FOR QUIRVY (LOL)

Hannah facepalmed herself. She'd read the explosion bit, yes, but not the rest! And the last part was weird. Mistaking people for Quirvy? What was with Quirvy? Quirvy was mentioned on every single medicine she brought...Hannah looked at her Anti-Throwing Up Medicine.

ANTI-THROWING UP MEDICINE
CURES THROWING UP. HAVE 3 TO 4 PILLS ONLY.
BEWARE: OVERDOSES MAY CAUSE YOU TO THROW UP CONTINOUSLY.
BEWARE: OVERDOSES MAY CAUSE YOU TO MISTAKE PEOPLE FOR QUIRVY (LOL).

It was weird. Hannah popped her treasure in her pocket. Then she began throwing up and throwing up. Hannah took 3 pills then 4 pills. Hannah then accidently took 5 and suddenly Haily looked like Quirvy. "Uh oh..." said Hannah.

Then Hannah realized it might just be a hallucation. Hannah took 2 pills.
Nothing happened.
"OH NO!" cried Hannah. Then Haily shouted, "QUIET!" "Sorry, Quirvy," said Hannah. "Ah!"

The she climed up a ladder and onto a rock. She shouted "I will find a pure citizen!" "I mean, I will find a cure to this medicine!" Then she looked down. "How did I get up here?"

But suddenly, Hannah realized she'd taken three pills instead of two! The overdose meant EXPLOSION! Hannah then suddenly felt sick. Teo landed the plane on a rock island were Haily was running into a cave. Hannah went out, and the plane flew away. Then Hannah checked her hallucinatory medicine. It was empty! Then Dando flew above and dropped a extra bottle on Hannah. It donged her on the head. Then a Pawkeet covered in Neopimples (caused by touching a TNT staff member) flew for the bottle thinking it contained Anti-Neopimples. Hannah found a sword and stabbed the Pawkeet in the foot. The Pawkeet crashed into the sea. Hannah chased Haily, along the way popping the hallucinatory medicine in her pocket. Then Hannah caught up to Haily and stabbed him with the sword, and claimed her treasure. Then a Red Pawkeet appeared. Hannah took four pills of the hallucinatory medicine, then exploded. Hannah was then on the ground, dizzy, and black all over. Hannah shook off the blackness. "I feel Skitty...I mean dizzy," Hannah giggled at her mistake. Then Hannah looked at the label of her medicine:

ANTI-HALLUCATION MEDICINE
2 PILLS EVERY TIME YOU THINK YOU ARE HAVING A HALLUCATION
BEWARE: OVERDOSE WITH 3, 4 OR MORE PILLS TWICE AND YOU WILL EXPLODE.
BEWARE: OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE THROWING UP, CONTINOUS DIZZINESS, AND CRYING WHEN NOT FEELING SAD.
BEWARE: OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE SEIZURES.
BEWARE: A QUADRUPLE OVERDOSE MAY ALSO CAUSE NEVERENDING HALLUCATIONS THAT CANNOT BE CURED AND MISTAKING PEOPLE FOR QUIRVY (LOL)

Hannah facepalmed herself. She'd read the explosion bit, yes, but not the rest! And the last part was weird. Mistaking people for Quirvy? What was with Quirvy? Quirvy was mentioned on every single medicine she brought...Hannah looked at her Anti-Throwing Up Medicine.

ANTI-THROWING UP MEDICINE
CURES THROWING UP. HAVE 3 TO 4 PILLS ONLY.
BEWARE: OVERDOSES MAY CAUSE YOU TO THROW UP CONTINOUSLY.
BEWARE: OVERDOSES MAY CAUSE YOU TO MISTAKE PEOPLE FOR QUIRVY (LOL).

It was weird. Hannah popped her treasure in her pocket. Then she began throwing up and throwing up. Hannah took 3 pills then 4 pills. Hannah then accidently took 5 and suddenly Haily looked like Quirvy. "Uh oh..." said Hannah.

Then Hannah realized it might just be a hallucation. Hannah took 2 pills.
Nothing happened.
"OH NO!" cried Hannah. Then Haily shouted, "QUIET!" "Sorry, Quirvy," said Hannah. "Ah!"
The she climed up a ladder and onto a rock. She shouted "I will find a pure citizen!" "I mean, I will find a cure to this medicine!" Then she looked down. "How did I get up here?"

Then she realised the ladder. She climbed down but fell onto Quirvy.

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